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Mini poems: Loneliness by ~DeadlyDisaster:iconDeadlyDisaster:



Loneliness is grey
It tastes cold, dry and hollow
Loneliness is the smell of something left in the dark to long
And looks like a damp, dark room
The sound of unheard tears
Loneliness emptys me
©2007-2009 ~DeadlyDisaster
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Author's Comments

This is one of three mini poems that i wrote for an english assignment

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i really like the descriptive language you used... the first line nailed it, and the third line was very original...good job

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Thank you

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He writes caligraphy on my heart strings,
Weaving letters through tangled bands,
Tying knots with perfectly placed rhymes,
& making me double over with love

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August 6, 2007
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